I'm taking a vacation from work this week, a much needed break from stress. I decided my first venture would be to tackle a revision of this painting.
I decided the treeline was pretty boring so I fixed that up by bringing the sky down some into the trees and breaking them up a bit. I also added more farm buildings and a couple of larger trees. A suggestion I had received was to add more texture to the foreground field, so I attempted that, but I'm not sure how successful I was!
Here is the before:
And the after:
I'd really appreciate your feedback on this one...is there too much or not enough texture in the field. Does it need to look more realistic?
I think your revisions are very successful - there is "life" now - I like the lighter detailing in the foreground and the sunlight added between and behind the haybales. The trees on the horizon are also much stronger - over-all you have changed an adequate painting into a winner!
ReplyDeleteThanks Barb, I really appreciate your comments!
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