I had just finished another piece (Corny), and I had all my collage materials spread out in front of me, so I started adding to it. I'm much more happy with it now!
And thanks to my good friend Lauren, it has a great title! I've already entered it in the show show where it was rejected before. I'm figuring there will be a different juror, so we'll see what happens!
Here it is now:
And how it was before:
The Aftermath!
I hope you win. Both are nice pieces but the second is certainly more vibrant and eye catching. I love art with wheat in it. Good luck.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lorraine!
DeleteI agree w Lorraine, the first time it was nice, now it's dynamic and exciting! Excellent work! Good luck :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Robin for you kind comments!
DeleteThe revised version is definitely more exciting. A whole different feel about it, Patty. Best of luck with the show!
ReplyDeleteThanks Billie! I'm much more pleased with it now. I hope to hear soon if it has been accepted!
DeleteWell done. All the best, I like the title too, think it's appropriate.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, I'm glad you like it!
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