I had just finished another piece (Corny), and I had all my collage materials spread out in front of me, so I started adding to it. I'm much more happy with it now!
And thanks to my good friend Lauren, it has a great title! I've already entered it in the show show where it was rejected before. I'm figuring there will be a different juror, so we'll see what happens!
Here it is now:
And how it was before: